雅思写作--中国学生常犯的五个错误

    最普遍的现象:双谓语

    1)There be 句型

    There are many people agree tokeep pets at home.

    There be句型中,BE动词已经是谓语了,而句中的agree又是个谓语动词。所以此句可改为:

    There are many people who agree tokeep pets at home.

     

    2) 整个句子做主语

      Environmental pollution is becoming more serious is an undeniable fact.

    此句可改为: It is an undeniable fact that environmentalpollution is becoming more serious.

     

    3) 动词做主语

       Do part-time jobs helps students to relieve their financial burden.

    主语必须是名词或代词,因此,

    Doing part-time jobs helps students torelieve their financial burden.

     


    2. 无谓语

    We all against all kinds of terrorist activities.

    这主要是受了汉语的干扰,反对against这个词在英语中是介词

    应改为:We are all against all kinds of terroristactivities.

    None can negative the importanceof money

    Negative是名词或形容词,也无法充当动词使用,应改为:

    None can deny the importance of money.

    可见大多数无谓语的句子是由词性的误解所造成的。

    3. 平行结构的问题

    There is a great differencebetween dinning out and to have a snack at home

    Between A and B,其中,AB在词性上必须是一致的。这种规则同样适用于听力中的某些填空题。比如某次听力考试,有这么一道题(剑桥雅思5第二套题的SECTION4):… stations contain accommodation, work areas, akitchen, a ______ and a gym.这个空格中的答案一定是名词,与 kitchen, gym是一类的事物。


    4. 主谓一致的问题

    To teach many children are a hard job.

    不定式做主语,谓语动词一般现在时中应使用单数第三人称

    To teach many children is a hardjob.

    5. 逗号乱打的问题

    Beijing is a beautiful city, I enjoy living here.

    逗号不能连接两个句子,除非他们属于并列句,那就需要使用FANSBOY

    (for, and…) 此句应改为:

    Beijing is a beautiful city, so I enjoy living here.

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